This is going to be entered in the PSA category....it's all about how students that look or act differently are "all welcome here". There will be quite a bit of voice over in the film....not completed yet.
Some very compelling camera work in the intro; it really showed visual thinking. I liked the contrasts (boy/girl, short/tall). They were presented well. When the short kid asks for help, keep the music at regular level while he walks up to the stack and lower it just as he speaks. Anxious to see the finished product.
paulsimpsonMar 13, 2008 9:07 PM
Very good. I like the theme. Good luck.
scottsoucyMar 14, 2008 6:29 PM
The first scene (when the kids are busy working) did a good job of capturing my attention. The music and introductory voice- over are well done. The girl/boy title seemed a little off balance in comparison to the other two titles. You may want to consider placing that title between the two students like you did with the others. Overall, a well done PSA!
Sandra Burton-DentMar 23, 2009 8:52 AM
We love the opening title shot, the music, the shot of the kids working (scene set ups), and the voices were clear. Great idea. Look forward to the final production.
Frank Maggi
Mar 10, 2008 11:47 AM
Some very compelling camera work in the intro; it really showed visual thinking. I liked the contrasts (boy/girl, short/tall). They were presented well. When the short kid asks for help, keep the music at regular level while he walks up to the stack and lower it just as he speaks. Anxious to see the finished product.
paulsimpson
Mar 13, 2008 9:07 PM
Very good. I like the theme. Good luck.
scottsoucy
Mar 14, 2008 6:29 PM
The first scene (when the kids are busy working) did a good job of capturing my attention. The music and introductory voice- over are well done. The girl/boy title seemed a little off balance in comparison to the other two titles. You may want to consider placing that title between the two students like you did with the others. Overall, a well done PSA!
Sandra Burton-Dent
Mar 23, 2009 8:52 AM
We love the opening title shot, the music, the shot of the kids working (scene set ups), and the voices were clear. Great idea. Look forward to the final production.