This video was created by my 7th grade beginning video class. The topic is dark --- focusing on how we all have a "breaking point" when we can't take verbal abuse anymore... However, I feel the video is compelling and uses a good combination of sound and angles to convey a serious message.Any feedback is appreciated.
Sincerely,
Tamara Whitney
Frank Maggi
Mar 22, 2010 1:15 PM
The black and white is very effective here, and nicely shot to boot. The score is spot on for this and nice hammer blows. Powerful script, well delivered. It would have been perfect if at the line"...until you reach the breaking point..." there was a really strong visual of the ice block cleaving in two to really sell the idea of "the breaking point".
courtneysimson
May 7, 2010 7:28 PM
Once again, I am utterly blown away by the quality of your work, Tamara. Honestly? If you were not in education, I think you could probably be earning hundreds of thousands of dollars a year as a professional director. -Courtney