This Public Service Announcement is explaining the risk that people take when they jaywalk. We've seen many children and adults jaywalking after and before school at Mission, and we decided to make a video showing its consequences. This video also shows students taking action and making the right choice to use the crosswalks.What we need to work on: We need to re-record the voiceovers to make them clearer...
shannonsvensen
Mar 12, 2010 1:23 PM
Great job! I really like the creative shots that show the accidents without showing the accidents. Concise, powerful, effective.
Frank Maggi
Mar 12, 2010 2:50 PM
Nice use of musical support. I really liked the collage-y (sp?) nature of your visuals: lots of change but always moving the message forward. Any chance of bumping the levels of the voice-overs? Or better yet, re-record with a better mic?
lebracfletes
Mar 15, 2010 12:58 PM
Great video. Message was loud and clear. My students enjoyed your class' video. Great shots and and consequences of jaywalking. You might not want put the last name of the students in the credits and just their first names.
melissaandrews
Mar 15, 2010 2:46 PM
We really liked this. I watched it with my video group. They really thought the message was crystal clear. The camera angles were great!
tcollier
Mar 17, 2010 8:33 PM
Nice visuals! I'm glad you made a film about this because it is a real problem in Escondido. Very Powerful! I will show this to my students.
Astrid Martin
Mar 18, 2010 8:11 PM
Enjoyed you video! I agree with the other comments about the nice mix of visuals & shot angles. I thought it was well done. in your comments you mentioned re-recording the voice overs. That would probably make the finishing touch!