Nice visual style, Mary. And the project looks well thought out. I like the switch to black and white for the bad stuff. To really emphasize that, you may want to color correct the color shots to be really vibrant (but still believable). Maybe an XCU of a front tire breaking hard just before Title? Great job.
melissaandrewsJan 13, 2010 10:14 AM
Mary - I love the idea. We have such a terrible jaywalking issue here at Pioneer. I can't wait to share it with the kids. The storyboard is very organized. The photos are terrific - fun camera angles. Have fun with the filming!
Astrid MartinJan 16, 2010 2:15 PM
It was a pleasure to read through the storyboard and follow its development. It makes sense and flows. I like the visuals, the drama of the real-life situations, and how you are representing them on film. I think it has good impact while being simple. This should be a good one.
Elvi MackintoshJan 25, 2010 11:06 PM
Strong message! Just enough graphic content to convey the meaning! The music and sounds will add to the dramatic effect of your video. Impressive!
lebracfletesFeb 1, 2010 1:31 PM
Great visuals. You will be able to reach out to most all of the students (NEP'S, ESL & EP's). I'm sure the students will get a kick out the baby seen. Great start.
Frank Maggi
Jan 8, 2010 9:28 AM
Nice visual style, Mary. And the project looks well thought out. I like the switch to black and white for the bad stuff. To really emphasize that, you may want to color correct the color shots to be really vibrant (but still believable). Maybe an XCU of a front tire breaking hard just before Title? Great job.
melissaandrews
Jan 13, 2010 10:14 AM
Mary - I love the idea. We have such a terrible jaywalking issue here at Pioneer. I can't wait to share it with the kids. The storyboard is very organized. The photos are terrific - fun camera angles. Have fun with the filming!
Astrid Martin
Jan 16, 2010 2:15 PM
It was a pleasure to read through the storyboard and follow its development. It makes sense and flows. I like the visuals, the drama of the real-life situations, and how you are representing them on film. I think it has good impact while being simple. This should be a good one.
Elvi Mackintosh
Jan 25, 2010 11:06 PM
Strong message! Just enough graphic content to convey the meaning! The music and sounds will add to the dramatic effect of your video. Impressive!
lebracfletes
Feb 1, 2010 1:31 PM
Great visuals. You will be able to reach out to most all of the students (NEP'S, ESL & EP's). I'm sure the students will get a kick out the baby seen. Great start.