I really enjoyed your PSA. I liked the shots you chose and the camera angles you used. It moved along well and had a nice feel to it. I'm supposed to include a suggestion, but it's hard to think of one. Nicely done.
maryjoblazeDec 7, 2009 11:14 AM
Good job. I loved the kids coming out of the trashcans - very creative. Also, kids will make the money connection. The only thing I saw (and LITTLE it is) would have been to color the box the money was in, so it looked like the entire thing was filled with cash.
melissaandrewsDec 7, 2009 11:27 AM
This is a great PSA! The background sound effects are terrific! I agree that the camera angle choices were very effective!
Frank MaggiDec 7, 2009 1:08 PM
I agree there was a lot of creativity in the visuals: great camera angles, stomping feet, heads popping out; very effective. Nicely paced so your attention doesn't wander. The transition from trash to cash was really well done. My main suggestion is that some of the kids' voice levels could have been a little louder; it should control the scene. OK, 'fess up; was the audio of the guys in the golf cart lip synced? If so, nice job. That ain't easy.
Jennifer MoonDec 8, 2009 7:57 AM
Wow! Nice job Mary. I loved the different shoes for the crushing piece. Also the kid in the can. Nicely paced. Hard to think of a suggestion. : )
lebracfletesDec 14, 2009 10:12 AM
Great job Mary. I liked the part when the two students were in the golf cart. Maybe for next time you can adjust the music. It seemed to go a little loud and then low, then loud again. I did that on some of my first videos and you couldn't hear my students speak. Great footage.
Astrid Martin
Dec 6, 2009 10:46 AM
I really enjoyed your PSA. I liked the shots you chose and the camera angles you used. It moved along well and had a nice feel to it. I'm supposed to include a suggestion, but it's hard to think of one. Nicely done.
maryjoblaze
Dec 7, 2009 11:14 AM
Good job. I loved the kids coming out of the trashcans - very creative. Also, kids will make the money connection. The only thing I saw (and LITTLE it is) would have been to color the box the money was in, so it looked like the entire thing was filled with cash.
melissaandrews
Dec 7, 2009 11:27 AM
This is a great PSA! The background sound effects are terrific! I agree that the camera angle choices were very effective!
Frank Maggi
Dec 7, 2009 1:08 PM
I agree there was a lot of creativity in the visuals: great camera angles, stomping feet, heads popping out; very effective. Nicely paced so your attention doesn't wander. The transition from trash to cash was really well done. My main suggestion is that some of the kids' voice levels could have been a little louder; it should control the scene. OK, 'fess up; was the audio of the guys in the golf cart lip synced? If so, nice job. That ain't easy.
Jennifer Moon
Dec 8, 2009 7:57 AM
Wow! Nice job Mary. I loved the different shoes for the crushing piece. Also the kid in the can. Nicely paced. Hard to think of a suggestion. : )
lebracfletes
Dec 14, 2009 10:12 AM
Great job Mary. I liked the part when the two students were in the golf cart. Maybe for next time you can adjust the music. It seemed to go a little loud and then low, then loud again. I did that on some of my first videos and you couldn't hear my students speak. Great footage.