Very nice! I loved the pacing, the performances, the language. Some very nicely arranged compositions with the camera, too. Great tagline at the end. I would consider holding off on the switch to color a little longer. Just a thought.
geraldlakeMar 11, 2008 11:16 PM
I liked the bw to color . Made a nice contrast. The student performances were great.
patcarlsonMar 13, 2008 12:10 PM
I second the above, the student performances were great. Good use of B/W. You might want to slow the credits at the end and cut the music after the credits are over. I kept watching to see if their was anything else while the music played. The judges will ding you for that.
maryjoblazeMar 14, 2008 8:09 AM
Boy, it's hard to come up with something new....I, too, liked the black and white and use of shadows, etc. The girls made it "real" for the viewer. I also tend to watch until the music stops even if there's nothing else on the screen, so changing that timing would be good. Great message!
carriemcgibneyMar 14, 2008 10:21 PM
Great Job Michael! Great Message. Girl's voices were very clear. I liked your transitions and the change up from black/white to color. I thought your camera angles were great. I liked how you mixed it up. The last scene where the girls have arms around each other and walking away was excellent. Congrats- job very well done!
Frank Maggi
Mar 10, 2008 3:24 PM
Very nice! I loved the pacing, the performances, the language. Some very nicely arranged compositions with the camera, too. Great tagline at the end. I would consider holding off on the switch to color a little longer. Just a thought.
geraldlake
Mar 11, 2008 11:16 PM
I liked the bw to color . Made a nice contrast. The student performances were great.
patcarlson
Mar 13, 2008 12:10 PM
I second the above, the student performances were great. Good use of B/W. You might want to slow the credits at the end and cut the music after the credits are over. I kept watching to see if their was anything else while the music played. The judges will ding you for that.
maryjoblaze
Mar 14, 2008 8:09 AM
Boy, it's hard to come up with something new....I, too, liked the black and white and use of shadows, etc. The girls made it "real" for the viewer. I also tend to watch until the music stops even if there's nothing else on the screen, so changing that timing would be good. Great message!
carriemcgibney
Mar 14, 2008 10:21 PM
Great Job Michael! Great Message. Girl's voices were very clear. I liked your transitions and the change up from black/white to color. I thought your camera angles were great. I liked how you mixed it up. The last scene where the girls have arms around each other and walking away was excellent. Congrats- job very well done!