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    toddmattoxOct 2, 2008 12:18 AM

    This was cool. I never saw the end product. Good job!

    Greta LemonMay 30, 2009 6:18 PM

    I love the dream sequence idea, and the great description the student came up with after his dream. The dream was an effective visual that emphasized the contrast between the student's first and second sentences.