Your PSA looks very good. I thought it was easy to follow and understand. The dogs were a great idea and I especially liked how you made the sentences describe the dogs' actions. Nice job.
Frank MaggiDec 7, 2009 11:32 AM
I really liked the three different, but related, examples in the short time span of this PSA. Really hammered home your main point. You should be at the Wild Animal Park if you can get those two to just sit in front of the food for so long. Effective. I liked the narration throughout; I think I would have used it at the front to underscore the words on screen. Great piece. Oh, and I loved your Production Company Name/Logo.
mwalshDec 7, 2009 1:28 PM
Very Nice! Loved the use of animals... really relates to children! I too liked how the dogs' actions were linked to the example compound sentence. Great work!
Elvi MackintoshDec 7, 2009 9:02 PM
Very professional-looking and creative! I like the repetition of the steps for each conjunction. The music and your actors capture the attention to keep watching. I would add, "Choose the appropriate conjunction to connect the sentences." ¡Excelente!
Jennifer MoonDec 8, 2009 2:49 PM
LOVED IT! Dogs always make things great. Good examples. I will show this to my class!
lebracfletesDec 14, 2009 10:03 AM
Good job. I liked how you showed examples. It was quick to the point.
An Introduction to compound sentences.
Astrid Martin
Dec 6, 2009 10:51 AM
Your PSA looks very good. I thought it was easy to follow and understand. The dogs were a great idea and I especially liked how you made the sentences describe the dogs' actions. Nice job.
Frank Maggi
Dec 7, 2009 11:32 AM
I really liked the three different, but related, examples in the short time span of this PSA. Really hammered home your main point. You should be at the Wild Animal Park if you can get those two to just sit in front of the food for so long. Effective. I liked the narration throughout; I think I would have used it at the front to underscore the words on screen. Great piece. Oh, and I loved your Production Company Name/Logo.
mwalsh
Dec 7, 2009 1:28 PM
Very Nice! Loved the use of animals... really relates to children! I too liked how the dogs' actions were linked to the example compound sentence. Great work!
Elvi Mackintosh
Dec 7, 2009 9:02 PM
Very professional-looking and creative! I like the repetition of the steps for each conjunction. The music and your actors capture the attention to keep watching. I would add, "Choose the appropriate conjunction to connect the sentences." ¡Excelente!
Jennifer Moon
Dec 8, 2009 2:49 PM
LOVED IT! Dogs always make things great. Good examples. I will show this to my class!
lebracfletes
Dec 14, 2009 10:03 AM
Good job. I liked how you showed examples. It was quick to the point.