Wow, beautiful use of photos! The music choice is excellent. I had a hard time reading through some of the text before the next slide came up.
maryjoblazeMar 13, 2008 8:37 AM
Great photos and music choice! Images do say a thousand words. I, too, didn't get the longer scripts read before the next one came up. Also, what about having some of the photos just being close up still shots (instead of zooming in) to change it up. It's nicely done!
patcarlsonMar 13, 2008 12:00 PM
Great job, this will do very well at IVIE. I did not have enough time to read the text on many slides as well. The music should extend to the end and very a few shot as mentioned above and you will have a great project.
michaeldeneveMar 14, 2008 5:25 PM
I agree with the above comments, great pictures and moving music. Someone mentioned to vary the motion of the pictures. I would agree with that. A very effective presentation. Maybe you can add a voice over some of the sections to add variety. Good job!
larissaparkerMar 17, 2008 1:39 PM
Very educational. Even I learned something I didn't know. As a tool in the classroom, here are my suggestions: lengthen the time allowed to read the text. Use a couple of other kinds of transitions to mix it up a bit. If you can find them, add more pictures with children so they can connect more to the experience. The last few shots with multiple pictures on the screen was a cool effect, can you run your titles along the bottom? nice work!
steviewheeler
Mar 12, 2008 2:21 PM
Carrie, great use of photos; I like it very much!
loriricci
Mar 13, 2008 8:34 AM
Wow, beautiful use of photos! The music choice is excellent. I had a hard time reading through some of the text before the next slide came up.
maryjoblaze
Mar 13, 2008 8:37 AM
Great photos and music choice! Images do say a thousand words. I, too, didn't get the longer scripts read before the next one came up. Also, what about having some of the photos just being close up still shots (instead of zooming in) to change it up. It's nicely done!
patcarlson
Mar 13, 2008 12:00 PM
Great job, this will do very well at IVIE. I did not have enough time to read the text on many slides as well. The music should extend to the end and very a few shot as mentioned above and you will have a great project.
michaeldeneve
Mar 14, 2008 5:25 PM
I agree with the above comments, great pictures and moving music. Someone mentioned to vary the motion of the pictures. I would agree with that. A very effective presentation. Maybe you can add a voice over some of the sections to add variety.
Good job!
larissaparker
Mar 17, 2008 1:39 PM
Very educational. Even I learned something I didn't know. As a tool in the classroom, here are my suggestions: lengthen the time allowed to read the text. Use a couple of other kinds of transitions to mix it up a bit. If you can find them, add more pictures with children so they can connect more to the experience. The last few shots with multiple pictures on the screen was a cool effect, can you run your titles along the bottom? nice work!